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Hale Family

Anastacia Hale

Long brown curly hair and dark blue eyes, can see the future due to the “accident” see had when she was 10 years old. no one knows except her twin brother, Marco who was in the “accident”. due to the fact she trusts him to the fullest and he also has a secret from his parents the ability to change the weather due to his emotions and feelings. She usually has a vision of the future when someone is making a big decision and she tries to keep it that way until she finds out who she will be with all her life and she tries to keep it that way but the boy might not know what exactly is going on. Will she tell him her secret and her life to him for true love?

Marco Hale

Short, brown hair with the most little blue eyes. He can change the weather with his emotions and feeling due to the fact, he and his twin sister, Anastacia were in an “accident” that changed their lives forever. They keep this a secret due to the fact their parents, Mary Alice and Carter Hale are the regular-type parents, only see stuff black and white and it would cause gossip if their children were the freaks in the the little town of Deer Park. They have a nice live with what money can buy. They are popular but they never use it to hate on people. He meets a girl that he cares so much about that he lets his emotions and feelings affect the town.

Carter Hale

Short curly dark black hair, in his mid’s 30. He’s the parent of the twin, Marco and Anastacia. He’s a lawyer for Madison’s Law Firm in Portland, Maine. He is the type of parents that money buys happiness and hard work is the key. He keeps to himself and talks to his wife because he truly does love her, but sometimes temptation gets to him when his firm gets a new lawyer and things might get heated up in The Hale Manor.

Mary Alice Hale

Long and curly brown hair, with crystal blue eyes. She’s the mother of the twins, Marco and Anastacia. She’s a doctor but spends time with her children. She’s love them so much that she was willing to give her life to her children when the “accident” occurred. She met Carter in her years of college life and met him in dated him after he ended up in the hospital for a knee injured playing some football. She has the feeling that Carter is cheating on her that she was to separate from sometime but he tells her that he not that he only loves her. She’s half Italian, so she constantly speaks Italian or Spanish to her kids.



Luke Taylor

Short blonde hair, with green eyes. He’s 17 years old like the Twins. He very loud and is in the “It”crowd. He’s best friends with Marco and he kinda likes Anastacia. He’s parents are in the Army as what he told everyone. No one has meet or seen his parents since he moved to Deer Park and that was one year ago. He claims to be Italian descent so he always has a ring crest on. he can read everyone minds except Marco and Anastacia which makes him wonder what they are. He also hides a secret that he is willing to tell his true love that’s if he does find her.

Isabelle Santiago

Short curly hair blonde with brown eyes. She’s perfect and very gorgeous. She’s a bit country and loves everyone. She mets Marco in a cafe, and they just hit it off. They soon start hanging out that they end up kissing each other under the stars. Her parents, Mayor of the City of Deer Park, doesn’t allow her to date no guys unless theirs willing to talk to him first. She wants to be official with Macro but is scarred her dad might destroy that.

Karlee Miller

Best friends with Anastacia, she likes Luke but is scarred to tell Anastacia because she knows she likes him too. And she ends up ending their friendship, and joins Honor “It” crowd just to flirt with Luke and tries to sleep with him but fails due to the fact, he tells her his in love with someone else that she knows that special girl. She gets mad and will do anything to end that relationship even if it kills her....

Honor Matthews

Hates Anastacia because she better looking then her. She gets Karlee to join her because she tells her that Anastacia is a freak and she heard that Luke likes her and it was a lie. She ends up liking Marco but hears that Marco is Anastacia’s twin, which might makes her switch sides or hate Anastacia more. She makes the plot for Karlee to sleep with Luke but fails because he was not so much into Karlee but Anastacia.New story, need help?
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