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Now he is enjoying Maine East very much. He is every time excited to learn more English and new stuff his teacher especially from Mrs. Labno. Though he got confusing expression most of the time, but sometime he makes people laugh. He was kept in E.S.L level 1. So he started learning English from basic things. He got most of the E.S.L classes so he didn鈥檛 have much problem but in just of the gym class it was regular class and he had hard time in understanding English and problem was that some of the regular students were making fun of him just because he doesn鈥檛 know much English. But now he started himself new job at Value City Departmental store. By this he learned lots of new stuff and he is learning more and more English with other people. But he got quite busy schedule. So directly after school he goes to work and come home at 10: pm and then start doing his homework. At last he sleeps at 11:30 pm.

While talking about food he loves Indian spicy food. He also likes some of the American food, Chinese and Mexican Thai. But the only problem is that he is vegetarian. So he never eats any type of meat and stuff. Even though sometime he wants to eat some non-vegetarian food but he is afraid that his parents will know. His parents told him not to eat any kind of meat. They are very religious people and follow their custom very streak.

His weekends are always kind of busy. He works both Saturday and Sunday in weekend, so his most of the weekend pass by doing job. Some time after work he uses to play computer games, surf and chat with friends and when it is good weather outside he uses to play cricket with his friends. Cricket is one of his favorite hobbies. He got lots of new friends in United States. He enjoys a lot working at Value City. He got lots of good friends and classmates who helped him a lot to learn new things. Now in his family everybody got jobs and settled down to new apartment. Now gemit is tries to do friendship with more fluent English speaker than people who speak his language. So now he fell relaxed and he is quite comfortable in this new country. But sometimes he still misses India a lot because he has most of his family still in India.Can u check this paragraph if it has some gramaticall mistakes in it ?
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instead of writing a long, lousy structured paragraph, try doing it in simple, short sentences.Can u check this paragraph if it has some gramaticall mistakes in it ?
wow there are a lot of problems in this...i could spend an hour editing it. try rearranging the order of the words. like, instead of "he is every time excited to learn more English and new stuff his teacher especially from Mrs. Labno." try, "He is excited every time he goes to learn more English and such from his teachers, especially Mrs. Labno."